wendi

i support him doing this, i hear you nanc ......yeah im with ya x

oh nanc, you ARE a doll ...i LOVE this reccent picture of him, he looks so relaxed and happy ....gonna do some shopping !!!!yYAY!! this pic wouldnt load up for me so there fore i couldnt post such handsomeness...what would i do without you !!!!!many thanxs for posting xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

MARIAH, ...WHY? HMMMM COS I THINK THIER CREATIVITY WOULD WORK.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, kRISTINA BABE XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXwe LOVE to partAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!

yeah i like his concepts haaaaaaaaaaaa are ya scared yet? haaaaaaaaaaa cool creativity

you know what ? i think he would listen to that fan and call them sweet names , i dont think he would ever do that name calling thing, i will agree with nanc, his farhther called himm bad names so i would feel he would know how much pain /damage/hurt, that can cause....so he wouldnt ever dream of doing that uncool name callin 'thing .x

sara,sara,sara,i dunno how old you are <i know age has NOTHIN to do with it, > but YOU are one brilliant writer.it was easy to write for you cos its growing . belive me ..your characters are..very,very,very, lovable<yes michael...wendi state the obviuos haaa> but they ALL are ..and they spring to life .they do,and they all have a background and its not jus michael you know/? ...and right down to last detail...the strong storyline...expressions...jus everything ..i cant fault it, your'e putting modern day michael in a masterpiece gal, i mean it and you know the bit i LOVE ..not seen it done before...and i havnt done it myself ..his bottom lip tick, how u describe/explan it.to me that has speacail impact on the sytory ,..its jus brilliant.you can realy feel michael in your writing, you have worlked very hard . you enjoy it ,again, you are excited by it as you read ..exploring each corner of your story ... its just GREAT to read sara, ....and like you say let the characters romp were they will...u know? .i would say that this is what he would be like as a vampyr....you have his character down to his last breath ,sara you will publish this and im buying .seriiously

see with this story . the way you write michaelbaby .the way that you present it , its reality,then goes to fantasy... then snaps back to reality.. yeah it works ..its diffrent, its very intresting like tessmj says......it works and it keeps the reader on edge.its easy to read with the part about the phonecalls /talking/ or internet.your characters come to life, i like that alot. i like the emotion that you put in that .think its the making of something exciting and special..the feeling deep down inside when you write and you're proud ,you know its good ..and you dont want it to stop.yeah ..i look forward to the next chapter.

welcome ohtarie, you will love MJONE . welcome to the family

welcome brandin to MJONE, you will LOVE LOVE LOVE it here!!!!

welcome to MJONE nini, hope you meet lots of new mjj fans and enjoy the site .love to you, wendi xx

I LIKE THIS , THIS IS DEEP .

hey michaelbaby ...well , what can i say ?im looking forward to the NEXT part!!! ...theres some great work here..LOVE it .love your expresssions ...the details of your writing ..all very important isn't it ?......and you choose the finest words, dont you ? ...i love " gave michael a gentle kiss on his papered lips"..very heart felt . yeah , i felt that so ,..more please !!!!

i love the never give up ......i LOVE that message .